~>My Poem<~
Tuesday, November 30, 2004 @ 9:03 PM
hello people......i made a poem yesterday....but before that...i'll tell u bout me day (i dunno whether u care.....but..oh well! what the hey!) i'll just tell ya.....I went to compass point today with me mum....not too crowded as it was the weekdays.......saw a friend there....he was lookin' okay.....not too shabby....bought loads of things including a new notebook and 2 coloured pens but mainly food.
Now then i'll tell ya about my poem.....hope u guys/gurls like it.
it's called 'Gone'
I have been treated like an outsider
Doesn't matter whether i'm with my family or friends
It's hard to bear;
the treatment they're giving me
when they pretend like i'm not there
I feel really hurt
& sometimes makes me wanna vanish,
from the face of the earth
That treatment have been happenin' in my life for so long
In the end, i was gone.
There......hope u like it......PLEASE give comments on my guestbook.....I BEG U....writing poems is not my speciality but it's a try and i need people's advice
THANK YOU!!
